Your camera angle stays in the same position quite well, and the time between each shot seems to be pretty equal, but the shots compositional components are a bit weak. Also, the lighting changes Juristically in one of the shots.
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Shelby
1/16/2013 01:45:01 pm
Agreeing with David, the steady position of the camera is good but the composition is weak and you have fingers in the bottoms of the cameras, maybe? Or something idk. But I think the spacing of your shots is even and put together well.
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Julianne
1/16/2013 10:30:19 pm
I like how you open yours with not only a messy room but messy blinds, and fix it all. I also enjoy how you're only in one of the pictures; it's kind of a cool effect. The composition and contrast could be better, but your idea was very nice and the pictures turned out well.
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Alex
1/16/2013 11:09:39 pm
I agree with david. I like the composition and how everything is all messy. Great pictures
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Claire
1/16/2013 11:12:56 pm
I agree with David because the timing is off.
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sydney
1/21/2013 07:51:48 am
In one photo, the blinds are open, and in the rest they are closed. I cant tell if this was a purposeful choice or an accidental choice.
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